Exiled

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The man in the tree

is not known by all

Many must walk by and never see him

He watches and wonders

where humanity is headed

He’s been stuck in this tree

for as long as he can remember

His hands tried to break free

but only became exposed roots

If he could speak he would tell those who would listen

to lead with their hearts

to curb the ego that might otherwise trap them

in the grips of bark or in the fires of hell

His pain is etched in every line on his face

He once was a man who hurt many

Locked in this trunk

he’s had eons to regret the lack of compassion

the urge to get ahead at the expense of others

The pain he inflicted

because he did not try

he did not know

because he did not care

He was so self absorbed

he did not see that the pain he caused others

locked his heart with no key

left him stranded inside this tree

The tree of wisdom is born of a fate

from a man who can not move

a man who is not seen

a man who must watch

and try to break free

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Blessitude

Lorrie

9/3/14

I was in New York City last week.  This tree was in Central Park (my very first time in the park) and when I saw it, something made me stop and take a picture.  I did not see the “man” until I later looked at the photograph.  The poem just poured out of me with such sadness and regret for those who live a life with no awareness of the impact they have on others (and their environment.)

I wish for us all to live with awareness.  To come from love; for ourselves, for all others, for life!

2014-09-02 13.24.03                    2014-09-02 16.48.16

51 thoughts on “Exiled

  1. Brilliant work Lorrie, and what an amazing protuberance on the tree; do you see the man as having a beard?

    All best wishes.

    Hariod.

    [‘Exhiled’ – typo, or a word I’m not familiar with?]

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    1. Hariod…Thank you!! I did not see the beard…but now that you mention it I can see it so clearly!! I tried not to outline the whole thing because I wished for people to see what they would. And thank you for the heads up on the “typo”…yes…I will fix it now 🙂 Thanks so much for your beautiful support!! ❤

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    1. Thanks Kim…I love that you say that!! It gives me such pleasure to be able to convey what I see!! Hope that you are in a really beautiful place…the artwork you are presenting is so beautiful. I loved the post where you showed us your process!! Much love to you ❤

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  2. I know that man. I used to blame him, but…….hurting people hurt people. Lorrie, may the lovingkindness of you and all your readers continue to spread in ever widening circles of compassion.

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  3. Incredible! Sometimes faces appear in clouds… This man was severly punished! You’ve written a powerful parable dearrest Lorrie, yes very powerful… it is the law of cause and effect. He was selfish and unsensitive… selfishness and cruelty were his punishment, should I say his damnation… so, we’d better to open our eyes AND our heart, to see the beauties of the world we’re living in. I wish I were not “trunkized” like this poor man 🙂 🙂 I’d prefer to be its leaves dancing in the wind, touching the stars and night and listen the secrets of birds 🙂 thank you for this parable (and reminder), and much love to you 🙂 🙂
    ♥♥

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    1. Much love right back to you dearest!!! Where do I begin? I think with your new word, “trunkized”…I agree with you…so much better to be a leaf and “dance in the wind!…touch stars…and listen to birds secrets!!” I think there is a poem there! But I thank you so much Frédéric, for you always understand exactly what I am trying to convey…you always “get” me!! Much, much love! ❤

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  4. I love Central Park and your post is beyond amazing: impressive and emotional… ❤ once more: NATURE is the perfect artist and your super-imagination has done the rest – sooo well… congrats and keep on writing excellent poetry, Lady Lorrie! 🙂

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    1. Hi Me’lanie! ! Thank you so much 🙂 Central Park was amazing…I can see why you love it! I really appreciate the very kind words…I will always try to keep writing “excellent” poetry. ..hopefully my “muse”…the eternal divine inspiration will always be with me!!? I’m really happy that you liked it! ❤

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  5. How incredibly sad Lorrie. My heart goes out to this poor soul and the many others like him.
    You have connected what you see with you mind with your intuition and your heart. Very powerful and touching.
    Thank you Lorrie.
    Val ❤

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    1. Hi Val…yes! This is incredibly sad for me also…I can feel the pain of all the people who are “stuck.” We talk about the “tree of wisdom” and it made so much sense. The man is stuck there until he gains the wisdom of that tree. I get its a bit abstract but it is like a cycle. And the connection we have with every person…every thing! And I have always felt a kinship with trees 🙂 Thank you so much for your understanding and support 🙂 Much love to you ❤

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    1. I wondered what you would think UT….about my “man in the tree!” The way I see it…He is working his way out of the bondage of his soul!! He is almost out…I wonder how long it took him to learn the lessons that would free him???
      Thank you for stopping by and commenting, Keith!! (I don’t see the resmblance 😉 ❤

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  6. The man in the tree is amazing, but the words that came from you after seeing the man in the tree is even more amazing. What a gift you have sweet Lorrie. I have missed your posts while I was away from blogging for awhile. Hugs!

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    1. Hi Mags…Thank you!! Your words mean so much to me 🙂 I have missed you also…and I pray that your absence was due to something fun & wonderful! I thought about you and wondered why you weren’t showing up in my emails. Much love, and many blessings to you!! ❤ ❤

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    1. Hi Chris! I’m so glad you got to see him 🙂 I didn’t see it in person…but I found something interesting enough to take two photos (my friends think I take photos of the strangest things!) But when I looked at the photo….I didn’t even see a tree!!! Thanks for stopping by and commenting Chris 🙂

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  7. Beautifully placed in the arms of freedom.. As we shine our light and love on the darkest of souls there is a freedom that prevails.. Seeing beauty in all . With emotional darkness comes compassion and love, we are all given this contrast to see, so that we remember to Love and all else drops away .. Love always finds a way…much love Lorrie beautifully expressed!

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    1. Oh! Heart to Heart Robyn…your words are so beautiful and full of truth! We truly are given the contrast, and to think that they are opportunities to love just gives me such a great feeling! Thank you! I’m so happy you stopped by and added your incredible words…your reminder! Much love to you! ❤

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  8. You’re a creative machine Lorrie! I check a lot of blogs, and usually there are one or two new posts but you post almost every single day (sometimes multiple times)!! And with so much creative posts, it’s amazing. I really enjoyed this poem. I like your Haikus but this longer poem allowed your writing voice to come out. I enjoyed the pacing, descriptive words, introspection, and structure. I’m not big on poems that are rhyme, rhyme, rhyme. This was very pretty, great job!! 🙂

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    1. Thank you Zachary!! You are very sweet to say those wonderful things 🙂 I wish I could take credit for it…but so many times I feel like a secretary taking dictation….the words come from my soul I believe!! And I rarely, if ever, edit them. I also can’t plan to sit down and write…they just come so I better be ready! 😉

      Have a super blessed week my friend!! ❤

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