Haiku ~6/4/14

 

 

2014-06-04 12.16.47

Foliage layers

caress the lightened corners

of fragmented lies

 

Blessitude

Lorrie

6/4/14

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26 thoughts on “Haiku ~6/4/14

      1. You did a fine job, truly. I reblogged a haiku just a few moments from a Japanese man who like me, writes what I call “real” haiku….he is a wonderful writer and he always just nails it. When I grow up, I want to write as well as he does!

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        1. I saw your re blog and went to visit. I agree he is beautiful. ..I spent some time there and thoroughly enjoyed myself 🙂 Thanks for showing him to me. And I also looked at more of your Haiku and I believe it is very beautiful as well!! Thank you so much for all your inspiration! ! 🙂

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      2. I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to sound rude when I said “real” haiku. Your haiku hits all the rules and is lovely! I hope you will write more of them because I always enjoy reading them. It is just, sometimes, people think any poem with 5-7-5 is haiku. I work really hard on mine and even if they aren’t that good, I enjoy the hard work and the satisfaction. For your first haiku, you nailed it. 🙂

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        1. No worries. ..you did not offend me 🙂
          I was worried that I would offend the art of Haiku because I am a novice. I understand there is much intricacy and nuances…and I love the art form. I think in Haiku all day long…even waking in the middle of the night to write lines down! I am studying…hopefully learning. I hope to make you proud 🙂
          Blessitude

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    1. Hi Line…Thank you dear one! I really like Haiku…it is fun to supplement my freestyle poems with Haiku that is more structured. Hope you have a beautiful day…I think you must be getting up while I am getting ready for sweet slumber 🙂

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        1. Stunningly beautiful in every way dearest Line…THANK YOU!!! I shall have sweet dreams while you have an awesome morning and then I will see you tomorrow when I wake 🙂 🙂

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