Two Hands ~ Limitless Minds

Posted on Categories Collaborations, Poems
A collaboration with Harlon Davey at http://apatientvoice.com

20150619_105854Harlon

If I asked you to believe

Would you take my hand

And hold on tight

And let your mind be free?

 

If I asked you if you were certain

That you would stay with me

While we traveled through our minds and spirits

Would you still feel free?

 

If I asked you to walk to the place that light touches

Where Angel wings flutter

And I held your heart in the essence of Love

Would you be willing to meet your soul?

 

If I said to you

that I’ve been lost so long

Would you still hold on to my hand so I can feel safe

and together we will be found?

 

I will stay with you, and I will hold on to you

While we both let go

Searching forces truth

to slip through the cracks of our minds

 

And we will cross this threshold together 

 
 
Blessitude
Lorrie & Harlon
❤
6/24/15
We had so much fun with this collaboration 🙂  If you have never visited Harlon at his site A Patient Voice, I urge you to do so.  He makes me laugh, he makes me cry, he makes me think!  Intimately familiar with the healthcare system, he is a huge advocate and “Voice” for patients everywhere.  I am grateful for our connection and I think you will be also. ❤
 

45 thoughts on “Two Hands ~ Limitless Minds”

    1. Yes, Kim. It is exciting because you are not really sure where it will go, and there is always a little fear about how you will “measure up” so to speak. But then it does take a life and energy of its own and it becomes exactly what it was meant to be! Thank you, Kim! ❤

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  9. Great collaboration!!! I love the repetitions, they create such a powerful rhythm that magnify the message of your poem. Inspiring, forceful, very true… I follow Harlon’s blog, I’m glad you can co-write with him… congratulations to both of you, and above all THANK YOU for sharing such helpful thoughts. Love² 😉

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    1. Hello my dearest!! ❤ Thank you so much for your beautiful response, it touches my heart the words you have written. This is the first time I have had a collaboration that was not with you!! I am happy that you follow Harlon, he is a very kind soul and I am certain you both would enjoy each other! I hope that all is well with you. I hope to have a post on Sunday that will be of interest to you 😉 Much love my very dear friend!! ❤ ❤ ❤

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    1. Ah! I must admit Brad, that I too try to decipher which words belong to each person in a collaboration!! That makes me giggle 🙂 Thank you so much, I am very happy you liked this poem and I am very happy that you will go to visit Harlon. I’ve a feeling you will like it there 😉 Have a super wonderful rest of the week Brad! ❤

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    1. Hi Staci…thank you so much 🙂 It was a lot of fun and we worked well together. We each took only a “handful” (pun intended 🙂 ) of photographs and it was amazing how they complemented each other! Hope you are having a creative lovely week!! ❤

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      1. Thank you Lorrie. Actually, yes. I am having a very creative week. Thankfully. I will be traveling to tomorrow and am super busy preparing for that (will be gone a week and a half). However, I just posted one mixed media piece with poem yesterday, and then finished another mixed media piece last night that I’m super excited about. I really want to post it now, but I don’t like to usually post every day so I’m trying to hold out until I get back. I really love this one though. I can’t wait until I finish the poem I want to go with it. I’ll give you a little insight though. It’s called, “Eternity in her heart” 🙂 Anyhow, I love these creative streaks. It’s like an addiction, don’t you think.
        Have a great day and weekend Lorrie and many blessings.
        🙂 ❤

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