ALMOST PARADISE ~ Multiple Haiku




When your dream depends

On someone else to come true

There is always risk


What someone else sees

Is more likely THEIR vision

What is best for them


Not meant to deceive

They don’t even think about

How it could hurt you


It’s better for you

To do the hard work yourself

And to turn inward


You then are the one

Who designs your own blueprint

To make things work out


No interference

Exactly what you vision

Your dream is fulfilled


No regrets at all

For the time spent together

Wish them well…move on



Lorrie <3


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38 thoughts on “ALMOST PARADISE ~ Multiple Haiku

    1. Hi Brad! Yes! I think sometimes it is easy to get a little confused…and a little lost. And sometimes if we are around other people with strong personalities we can be led. Here’s to honoring our truth and being empowered by it. Much love to you ❀

        1. Yes Dennis, it is mine. Last week I saw the majority of it…just appeared in my mind…and had to sit down and draw it. Its fun when it happens like that πŸ™‚

  1. I can tell by looking at it that you had fun doing the drawing. The longer I look at it, the more I appreciate how fanciful and magical it feels.

    1. Thanks JoAnna! I did have fun! And it came out almost exactly how I saw it in my mind πŸ™‚ Hope you are working on something fun too πŸ™‚ β™‘

  2. It’s all love Lorrie as you know We create and co create in unison with the universe Our dreams and power generate their dreams and power We enter the timeless place of eternity until one day we make an agreement to be together eternally and we see them in everyone as love. When we let go with love to our high test truth we are always with our twin flame as we have real eased all old patterns of fear doubt and blockages to be love only in our hearts Whereever they are we are as there is no they and no separation Much love Lorrie from Down under in Australia

    1. I love you!! I see and feel your light and your words touch me in a deep place…a place of understanding..a place of Divine Love. Thank you beautiful sister ❀ ❀ DOWN UNDER!!!! Enjoy! πŸ™‚

      1. Thank you Lorrie for seeing and feeling me I see and feel you as well It has been 2 years linear time and a major journey for both of us. I have been on a modern day walk about here Seeing and being in the mystery of living in Love of all and everything heart to heart Robyn

  3. I tried to do a multiple Haiku once but I sprained my ankle…hahaha, I am just feeling silly in this moment. I think it’s just because I thoroughly enjoy everything you write – and did you do that artwork, I think I know the answer to that question. My question is, I suppose, is there anything you can’t do.

    And I think we’re both at the same point, maybe feeling a bit awkward with it or losing our sense of balance but you know what, there is nothing you can’t do.

    And, you are doing so much with that.

    Loving it all,


  4. I love that there is silly in your heart!! Imagine if everyone on the planet could drop into that energy from time to time πŸ™‚ I think there would be a whole lot less negative energy and, therefore, a whole lot less violence.

    Yes, my dear friend, the artwork is mine πŸ™‚ And funny you should say there is nothing I can’t do…because I have always ascribed to that thought in relation to “making things.” At this point I am learning to keep that thought…that energy…and transfer it from just making “things” to “making my life” exactly what I want it to be!!! It is very exciting ❀

    You are so dear to me…and I wish we lived closer because I know we could “while away the hours….”

    Sweet thought of peace and love…

    1. Thanks, Val πŸ™‚ “Express your self to the world,” I love it! I used to “hide” myself. But now as I get to know myself more…and more…I think I won’t be able to NOT express my self! β™‘β™‘

  5. Sweet Lorrie, I can’t help but think that this has to do with a certain friend of yours that may no longer be… I hope you are well Lorrie.
    Much love. πŸ™‚ β™‘

    1. Dear perceptive Staci πŸ˜‰ Yes…this was built around a friendship and an idea of “Paradise” that didn’t work out the way I thought it would. I am great…it is sad…but I have learned so much! Sweet blessings to you β™‘β™‘β™‘

      1. It is sad Lorrie, and I’m sorry to hear that. I’m glad that you are ‘great’ though, and that you have a teachable heart. That even in the tough thing life throws at us, you learned from it.
        Bless you, my friend.
        πŸ™‚ <3

  6. Lorie – this is such important, deep and great complex of Haiku – it show and brings a elegant idea which is imperative to us..

    1. Thank you Mino…it comes from the heart…and from a deep disappointment in my life lately that I am learning from. Many blessings to you β™‘

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